Let Me Tweet You a Story

Today I’m linking up with Write on Edge who gave the promt:

This week’s assignment will require the fewest number of words ever: we want you to write a story – your choice of topic – as a tweet.

 

 

Footsteps quickened behind her making her heart race & she searched for the source.

Just as she turned to run a hand closed over her mouth

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77 Responses to Let Me Tweet You a Story
  1. Frelle
    August 26, 2011 | 6:01 am

    nicely done! fear becomes shock and horror in 140 characters!

    • multitaskingmumma
      August 26, 2011 | 9:41 pm

      I was hoping that came across!

  2. Nancy C
    August 26, 2011 | 6:11 am

    Eek! Well, that’s no good. For her.

    The story is more than good. The story is gripping.

    • multitaskingmumma
      August 26, 2011 | 9:40 pm

      That is a fantastic comment!
      Thank you so much, I’m flattered!

  3. julie moore
    August 26, 2011 | 6:54 am

    Well that leaves me wanting more…

    • multitaskingmumma
      August 26, 2011 | 9:34 pm

      yay!
      Maybe I’ll add to it someday soon.

  4. Kir
    August 26, 2011 | 7:41 am

    oh my goodness, Leighann, I got scared and INTERESTED in 140 characters. I love it and Hope I can forget it before I lay my head down tonight. 😉

    • multitaskingmumma
      August 26, 2011 | 9:33 pm

      I hope you can forget too.. try to remember its not real Kir 🙂 xo

  5. Dana @ CheckingPockets
    August 26, 2011 | 7:47 am

    Ooooh! Very well done! Got my heart racing, too.

    • multitaskingmumma
      August 26, 2011 | 9:33 pm

      Such a scary thought isn’t it!!
      So glad you enjoyed.

  6. angela
    August 26, 2011 | 7:55 am

    Eeek, I am on the edge of my seat. More please!

    • multitaskingmumma
      August 26, 2011 | 9:31 pm

      Yay! I’m so glad I peeked your interest!

  7. Elaine
    August 26, 2011 | 8:29 am

    I don’t want to think about what happens next. But this is really good.

    • multitaskingmumma
      August 26, 2011 | 9:31 pm

      Thank you so much!
      I made it pretty freaky LOL

  8. Galit Breen
    August 26, 2011 | 8:39 am

    Ooh. PERFECT!

    Yes, perfect!

    Love it girlfriend!

    • multitaskingmumma
      August 26, 2011 | 9:30 pm

      I love hearing “perfect”
      it’s like a big giant gold star!
      Thank you my friend

  9. Jordan
    August 26, 2011 | 8:40 am

    It was her boyfriend and he was about to make her into a woman……am I right?! 🙂
    I looooooovvvvveeee your blog!

    • multitaskingmumma
      August 26, 2011 | 9:28 pm

      Perfect conclusion!
      I should have had you write the post!

      Thank you for loving my blog Jordan, that means a lot!

  10. Random Girl
    August 26, 2011 | 9:02 am

    Wow, this gave me anxiety just reading the 140! What a scary moment captured.

    • multitaskingmumma
      August 26, 2011 | 9:25 pm

      I’m glad it captured your interest so quickly!

  11. By Word of Mouth Musings
    August 26, 2011 | 9:28 am

    all this talent in these 140 characters … Me, I have not a hope!

    • multitaskingmumma
      August 26, 2011 | 9:23 pm

      WHAT???
      YOU not a hope?
      Not true! Not for one second!!

  12. jen
    August 26, 2011 | 9:44 am

    Holy crap!
    How good was that!

    • multitaskingmumma
      August 26, 2011 | 9:22 pm

      What a wonderful comment! Thank you so much.

  13. Kristy @PampersandPinot
    August 26, 2011 | 9:45 am

    Uh, oh!

  14. Paulette
    August 26, 2011 | 10:12 am

    Amazing;u gripping! Now we are all wondering how it turned out. 😉

    • multitaskingmumma
      August 26, 2011 | 9:22 pm

      That’s what I’ve been hearing…
      Maybe I’ll continue it one day.

  15. Andrea
    August 26, 2011 | 10:12 am

    ACK! Dang. That was good, mama!!!

    • multitaskingmumma
      August 26, 2011 | 9:20 pm

      Thanks so much Andrea!

  16. CDG @ Move Over Mary Poppins!
    August 26, 2011 | 10:13 am

    Oh no!

  17. Katie
    August 26, 2011 | 10:46 am

    Suspense. Intrigue. And a cliffhanger! Wow…I want it to continue!

    Stopping by and following from WOE. 🙂

    • multitaskingmumma
      August 26, 2011 | 9:20 pm

      I wanted to continue it too!! So hard to stop.

  18. Roxanne
    August 26, 2011 | 11:37 am

    Ack! Way to draw in a reader. What happens next??

  19. Denelle @CaitsConcepts
    August 26, 2011 | 11:42 am

    ACK! Nooooo!

    • multitaskingmumma
      August 26, 2011 | 9:17 pm

      I’ve missed you my friend!! xo

  20. Sue the Desperate Housemommy
    August 26, 2011 | 11:53 am

    So powerful! Well played. ps – I am envious of those of you who could do this prompt.

    • multitaskingmumma
      August 26, 2011 | 9:17 pm

      i found it difficult at the beginning.
      It took some time to wrap my head around the concept.

  21. Sweaty
    August 26, 2011 | 12:00 pm

    A gripping story, a quick but deadly kick to the gut. It’s like a beginning to a nightmare.

    Superb response to the prompt!

    • multitaskingmumma
      August 26, 2011 | 9:17 pm

      This was an awesome comment!
      Thank you!

  22. Cheryl @ Mommypants
    August 26, 2011 | 12:13 pm

    Ack!! Way to build suspense in such few words!

    • multitaskingmumma
      August 26, 2011 | 9:16 pm

      Thank you so much Cheryl!

  23. Leigh Ann
    August 26, 2011 | 12:50 pm

    Yikes! I want to know what happens next! Well done.

    • multitaskingmumma
      August 26, 2011 | 9:11 pm

      Tell me what you think happens?
      I’m taking story ideas LOL

  24. Robin @ Farewell, Stranger
    August 26, 2011 | 1:09 pm

    What’s with you guys and all your scary shorts?! So awesome! All these hidden talents I didn’t know about.

    • multitaskingmumma
      August 26, 2011 | 9:09 pm

      We all when freaky didn’t we?

  25. Mrs. Jen B
    August 26, 2011 | 3:47 pm

    Eek! My eyes flew wide open. I was so scared for her!

    • multitaskingmumma
      August 26, 2011 | 8:56 pm

      yah! happy you got a little freaked Jen!

  26. Jessica Anne
    August 26, 2011 | 3:56 pm

    Ooo, scary! Great job building tension.

    • multitaskingmumma
      August 26, 2011 | 8:55 pm

      Thank you! So glad I achieved what I sought out to do!

  27. Hopes@Staying Afloat!
    August 26, 2011 | 5:11 pm

    OH MY!!! Totally gave me the shivers!

    • multitaskingmumma
      August 26, 2011 | 8:47 pm

      Awesome!!

  28. Rai
    August 26, 2011 | 5:19 pm

    *gasp*!!!!!

    • multitaskingmumma
      August 26, 2011 | 8:47 pm

      Love this comment!

  29. Renee
    August 26, 2011 | 5:24 pm

    Oh noes! What next?
    Good job, I’m all spooked now.

    • multitaskingmumma
      August 26, 2011 | 8:46 pm

      What do you think happens next?
      I should ask everyone that!! LOL

  30. Jennie B
    August 26, 2011 | 6:30 pm

    Yikes! Definitely want to know what happens next.

    • multitaskingmumma
      August 26, 2011 | 8:46 pm

      I so wanted to keep writing! So hard to stop at 140 characters.

  31. Kim at Let Me Start By Saying
    August 26, 2011 | 6:54 pm

    Scary! Now I am left wanting more….

    • multitaskingmumma
      August 26, 2011 | 8:44 pm

      I’m really happy that you’re left feeling that way!

  32. Alison@Mama Wants This
    August 26, 2011 | 7:17 pm

    I’m scared and intrigued!!

    • multitaskingmumma
      August 26, 2011 | 8:43 pm

      Yay.. that’s what I was going for!

  33. JDaniel4's Mom
    August 26, 2011 | 7:18 pm

    You left us hanging. I hope she lives to tweet another day.

    • multitaskingmumma
      August 26, 2011 | 8:43 pm

      Me too! YIKES! That was freaky! LOL

  34. Julie
    August 26, 2011 | 9:54 pm

    How is it that we have stories SO close together! Very nice. 🙂

  35. Lindsay
    August 27, 2011 | 5:26 am

    Oooooooh. That’s one way to get my attention!
    Are you planning on expanding on this? We haven’t seen much fiction from you lately… and you’re GOOD at it 🙂

    • multitaskingmumma
      August 27, 2011 | 9:46 am

      I do have a couple fiction pieces in here. Let me know if you’re interested in reading them and I’ll send them to you.
      I like doing fiction but it takes a lot out of me to do it and I also have a hard time ending fiction.

  36. Jessica
    August 27, 2011 | 12:56 pm

    This left me with chills.

    • multitaskingmumma
      August 28, 2011 | 12:34 pm

      YAY!
      I’m glad it was spooky

  37. Kimberly
    August 27, 2011 | 2:41 pm

    Oh that’s chilling! Now I’m intrigued!

    • multitaskingmumma
      August 28, 2011 | 12:32 pm

      I am too!!
      I wonder what will happen LOL

  38. Karen @ Time Crafted
    August 27, 2011 | 4:28 pm

    Oooo….where’s she going? Who’s hand? Will she survive? Well done! :>

    • multitaskingmumma
      August 28, 2011 | 12:32 pm

      I would like to maybe expand on this but I also like that I left everyone hanging!

  39. Amy
    August 27, 2011 | 5:32 pm

    SCARY!!! And in so few words!

    • multitaskingmumma
      August 28, 2011 | 12:32 pm

      Thanks Amy Xo

  40. May
    August 28, 2011 | 3:04 pm

    I had the same sense that someone else mentioned. This has the feeling of a nightmare. Very nice job.

  41. Sarah
    August 28, 2011 | 3:27 pm

    What happens NEXT?! Great job – I want MORE!

  42. Mom
    August 28, 2011 | 9:18 pm

    How chilling! and what’s next? Amazing how so few words from you can generate so many responses from your followers. Love it, and you.

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